Teachers Comments

18/2/2014-Hadley-some great stuff here for planning and research-but there's something major missing: your research into codes and conventions! (prezi?) If that's done well, I think overall we're around 14-15/20, perhaps slightly higher. As the blog is currently, it can't go beyond 11/20 as it's technically incomplete! A few spg errors throughout that a careful proofread would eradicate.

Evaluation

Final Front Cover

Final Contents Page

Final Double Page Spread

Mock Up - Contents Page Editted

After changing my mock up of my contents page I decided to place my real images that I would use into my contents page, however once I did this I referred back to my original research and planning and found out that out of all of the magazines I had looked at not one of them used a whole page image for the contents page, so for my final production I will be changing this to two images that are spread across the page.

Focus Group- Choosing Bokeh

After editing my image I wanted to go away to my focus group in order to make sure that I was making the right decisions about what my front cover for my production would look like, so I asked my focus group, what type of bokeh(Glowing Dots) do you prefer? Small/Large

After receiving my results back from 10 of my focus group I had gained the results that 7 out of 10 people had preferred the large bokeh instead of the small bokeh and therefore I will be using this final image in the Production.