Mock Up- Contents Page

When i was researching into Contents pages i Particularly liked Billboards contents page with their blue lines separating parts of the page. I had then decided to use this in my mock up, and the final mock up is shown below. I have used found images from the internet and will be asking for feedback from my focus group just like the front cover for any other improvements i can make in the layout or the design of the Contents page.Also as this is only a mock up i have adapted the content of the magazine to suit the images that i have used however for my real magazine i will yet again adapt the contents so that it matches up with the images i will have taken.

Edited- After looking back on this mock up and after creating my double page spread i have decided that it does infact make the magazine look more 'Amateur' than professional print and therefore in my main task i will use more image manipulation, still using the lines to seperate certain parts of the page but i will use overlapping circles which will also tie into my double page spread showing that i have a consistent house style